Post by ilvgilmoregirls on Nov 5, 2006 18:14:44 GMT -5
My and my friend are writing this I really hope you like it.
Chapter 1:
The Parent Trap, Gilmore- Danes Styles
Chapter 1:
Both Luke and Lorelai have 8 year old daughers...Luke's daughter is Lena. They are both starting the 3rd grade. Luke and Lorelai are just friends.
Lorelai and Rory walk into the diner an excited Rory goes right up to the front where luke is
" Hey luke...where is Lena? Today is our first day of 3rd grade"
"She is upstairs getting her Backpack ready..You can go upstairs"
Rory runs up the stairs
Lorelai sits at the counter
"COFFEE please!! " she smiles at him
"You know coffee WILL kill you sooner or later"
"Yea yea lets skip the lecture" Rolling her eyes
Lukes get her a mug and pour her some coffee
" so our girls starting third grade huh" She smiles
" yeah i can't believe it. Im just glad they have each other. I mean Lena is lucky to have rory "
" Well Rory is lucky to have her too, i was worried when we moved here about her making friends. What time do they have to be there again? "
" At 8:30 and it is now 8 so we should get on our way. " He replied
" Okay," just then the girls walk down the stairs " Hey lena are you ready for 3rd grade? "
" Hey Lorelai, yea i am really excited...i heard that hottie dean is in our class! " A big grin goes across her face.
Lorelai laughs and looks at luke who rolls his eyes
" Dont Use 'hottie' for a guy unfront of me "
Rory and Lena start giggling
" Mom your boyfriend seems a little uptight " rory was joking about the boyfriend thing
" he is not my boyfriend. he is a boy who is my friend " Lorelai defends herself
" exactly your boyfriend "
" She probably thinks he is a hottie. woops im not allowed to use that word " rory and lena giggle again
" Girls stop harrasing Lorelai...Just cause she finds me as a hottie doesn't mean you can make fun of her " He says kidding around
the girls giggled some more and luke smiled
" I dont think your a hottie...i mean your not bad to look at...i mean...GAH!! Stop...we have to go. " redness going to her cheeks...Hoping Luke doesn't notice.
" Yea come on dad lets go" she grabed her dads hand and pulled him toward the door..rory did the same To Lorelai
" Ceasar be back later " he yelled from the door
" Dad can i go over to Rory's after school? " Lena asks on the way to school.
" you'll have to ask Lorelai, but i dont care "
" I don't care. You guys will have to hang at the inn until i go home. " She states.
" It's fine " Lena says.
" thanks mom " Rory looks at Lorelai.
they get to their class....
" Hey there's dean " She says pointing out a little boy walking around the class
" Yea " they smile with their eyes on him.
" Okay well i will see you later on then " Luke says and bend down to hug his daughter
" Bye dad "
" See you guys later " Lorelai bends down to hug both girls.
" Bye." they both say.
They walk inside the class.
" Hey Dean " Rory says waving.
" Hey Rory "
" hi " Lena says shyly
" Hi Lena "
" How was your summer? " Rory asks
" Good "
" thats cool..." she smiles at dean and he smiles back " Me and lena hung out all summer."
" thats cool. "
Mrs. Greenwood calls all the kids to sit at a desk.
Lena and rory sit at a table and dean joins them there is one more seat...A little asian girl sits there.
" Hi i am lena, and thats rory and dean " she says pointing to them
" Hi i am lane. "
" Are you new? I didn't see you here last year " Rory asks
" I did we just never talked to her " Lena says
" Oh sorry about that " Rory says to lane
" Its okay really "
" If you want Lena and i are going to my moms work after school you can come with us "
" Yea that sounds good..i have to ask my mom she is real strict. Are you Parents strict? "
" no...not at all " she looked at lena
" well my dad is Luke..and well he can be grumpy but he is nice to me " she smiles
" Thats cool. " Lane says
" My parents are okay. " Deans says
" okay. i can't wait now " Lane says getting excited
" Lena your dad is nice to my mom. Sometimes too nice." They giggle and Lane looks at them not knowing what they are talking about
" You ever think they would date?" Rory asks
" that be so cool. Then they could get married and we would be related " Lena says
" Lena we would be sisters "
" What are you guys talkig about? " Lane asks confused
" Miss Danes,Miss Gilmore and Miss Kim is there a topic you would like to share with the class? " the didnt notice the teacher had started and keptt talking
" We will fill you in after school" she whispered to Lane.
Rory looked to the teacher and answered her. " No ma'am go ahead." It was the first day of school and they were already in trouble hopefully she didnt call her mom or lena's dad
Later that Day Rory, Lena and Lane walked out of the Class they walked over to lorelai who was waiting for them outside the school...
" mom can lane come to the Inn also? "
" Uh sure...( to lane) where is your mom so we can ask her if she wouldn't mind."
"She is over there" pointing to a lady who is staring down Lorelai
" Okay...Come one girls lets go ask her " the girls follow Lorelai
Lorelai walks up to Mrs.Kim
" Hello i am Lorelai Gilmore I am rory's mother "
Mrs.Kim looks at her "yes "
" It seems Lane has made friends with Rory and She was wondering if she could well come over to play' "
" and how old are you? 16? "
" actually im 24 "
" not today. Lane has chores "
" but mama i did them yesterday "
" you have to clean " she says in a stern voice
" sorry guys " lane says turning around followin after mrs. Kim
" okay. Come on girls. I have some office work to
do. So you girls can come in there with me or stay in the lobby. "
" I love your office. we are so going in there "
" okay my office it is.. " Lorelai says
" okay ...it stunk lane couldn't come" Rory says to Lena
" I know her mom is uptight...just like your dad " The girl giggle
" Only worse " Lorelai says interupting in their conversation. Lena rolls her eyes
They reach the inn and run to the kitchen
" Hey Sookie do you have any sweet snacks? " Rory asks looking around the kitchen for some candy or desert of some sort.
" Yes try these " she hands them each a chocalte brownie drizzled with
white chocalte
Rory and Lena take one and take a bit out of them.
" MMmm They are great thanks sookie " Lena says half a mouth full of Brownie
" My mom told us to go to her office so see you later"
they walk out the kitchen as lorelai walks in
" You didn't fill them with sugar..Luke won't like that at all " Lorelai says
" its just like cookie lorelai thats all " Sookie says laughing
" just a cookie to you. If i take her home and she is bouncing off the walls her dad will have my neck " Lena walks in for another brownie
" its okay. I'll blame on me. " Lena says
" Thanks sweetie, but im the adult so i'll get the blame "
" Okay well if you insist" she shrugs and follows rory out the door
Sookie shakes her head and laughs
" that girl...crazy "
" Yea..so want somthing to eat? "
" nah i am not hungry....but i need coffee "
" I just made some " pointing to the coffee pot
" thanks. now i have to go and work "
" with lena and rory? "
": yea they are pretty quite. they help when i need it "
" yea they are good kids "
" Yea they are great kids...okay i better get to work"
Lorelai walks out the kitchen and into her office where Rory and lena are talking about luke and lorelai....When Lorelai walks in they quikly become quiet
" Whats going on? "
" N-nothing " Lena smiles
"uh-huh okay well i have to work so...if your up to somthing go be up to somthing in the lobby "
" okay come on lena lets go annoy michele "
Lorelai grabs her daughhter and hugs her
" I am so proud " they laugh
they go into the lobby and talk to michel
" hey michel "
" what do you want "
" just came to talk whats wrong with talking"
" because like your mom you dont know how to stop talking "
" okay then i will talk to you " Lena says smiling
" Dont you dare...your just as bad as they are....You are like lorelai too...."
" well thats not a bad thing"
" Yes it is...get out of my face"
Rory looked at Lena And rolled her eyes
Rory said to Lena "Come on lets go bug my mom"
"Yeah,she dont get irritated as easily"
they walk back into Lorelai's office
"So Lorelai watch you doing?"
"Busy work sweetie"
"Can i help? Can i? Can i?"
"no" She stated
"Please" lean put on the pout face
" Com'n guys....If you want to get home...i have to get all my work done, Plus i am not your dad, and i dont fall for the pouty face. I taught it to you both. " She says going striaght her work
" Mom, Please we can help you go quiker " Rory says
Lorelai ignores them
" so...Lorelai...How do you rate my dad on a scale of 1 to 10? " Lena says smiling giving a big grin at Rory...Who starts Giggling
Lorelai puts down the pincil she was using and looks at the two. " Guys! How many times do i have to tell you..Your father and I are just friends....JUST FRIENDS." She smiles and goes back to work..but then drops her pencil again " 9....and a half " She sais smiling
Lena and Rory starting laughing
"What is so funny?" She looks at the girls
"Should we tell her?" Lena asks Rory
"mm yeah"
"Last night when Rory was at my house. We asked my dad the same question and after he got annoyed he rated you a very perfectly 10"
"For and 8 year old you talk older than you age"
"It's my dad. what can i say"
Lorelai then realized what the girls has said and looked at them "A ten huh?"
" yea..I think he has a crush on you mom " rory said laughing
Lorelai finally gives up " okay lets go home...I wont get any work here anyways. I can do it in the morning. "
The Girls walk out of the Inn and back to Lorelai's house..
The girls sit down and watch T.V
" dont You have homework or somthing? " Lorelai asks
with out taking her eyes off the T.v Says " No, it was our first day we never get Home work :
Lorelai looks at Rory "well i know i have papers to sign. Can i have them?"
"In my book bag. Get them out"
"Rory?" lorelai was still looking at her
"Right.sorry. I'll get them"
"Thats better"
"Lena did your dad give you a time to be home?" Lena just shakes her head
.After about an Hour The girls were crashed on the couch
Luke comes and knocks on the door
Lorelai goes to the Door " hey, Come on in. They fell asleep " She said smiling leading him over to the couch.
" yea i can see that " he says laughing
" So.." She looks around the room ..there was an awkward silence " So yesturday When rory and Lena where at the apartment...Did they ask you anything about me? " She says smiling
"Like what?"
"well here is a hint. the asked me how i would rate you."
he laughs "Oh that.Yeah they asked me what i would rate you "
"What did you say?"
he smiles" If you say first i'll tell you"
"fine i said 9.....and a half"
his mouth dropped "well."
"Okay what about me?"
"I'll be honest i gave you a 1." Lorelai looked at him "Plus a zero which makes it 10"
" Yeah actually i knew.." He looked at her confused.
" They told me " She says
" oh i see " he says laughing rubbing the back of his head
" So..." She says smiling
" so...i better..you know" Pointing to Lena.
" right yea..school in the morning..You knnow if you ever have early deliverys...and you need her to stay a night. She can stay"
" yea...I know. You've told me a million times. I don't have early deliveries tomorow" He picks Lena up " well I better go " He smiles at her
" yea..bye.." She smiles
" See you in the morning " Luke says walking out the front door. Lorelai stands there smiling
" Yea" She says.
TBC......
So ya like it. Please please please Review.
Chapter 1:
The Parent Trap, Gilmore- Danes Styles
Chapter 1:
Both Luke and Lorelai have 8 year old daughers...Luke's daughter is Lena. They are both starting the 3rd grade. Luke and Lorelai are just friends.
Lorelai and Rory walk into the diner an excited Rory goes right up to the front where luke is
" Hey luke...where is Lena? Today is our first day of 3rd grade"
"She is upstairs getting her Backpack ready..You can go upstairs"
Rory runs up the stairs
Lorelai sits at the counter
"COFFEE please!! " she smiles at him
"You know coffee WILL kill you sooner or later"
"Yea yea lets skip the lecture" Rolling her eyes
Lukes get her a mug and pour her some coffee
" so our girls starting third grade huh" She smiles
" yeah i can't believe it. Im just glad they have each other. I mean Lena is lucky to have rory "
" Well Rory is lucky to have her too, i was worried when we moved here about her making friends. What time do they have to be there again? "
" At 8:30 and it is now 8 so we should get on our way. " He replied
" Okay," just then the girls walk down the stairs " Hey lena are you ready for 3rd grade? "
" Hey Lorelai, yea i am really excited...i heard that hottie dean is in our class! " A big grin goes across her face.
Lorelai laughs and looks at luke who rolls his eyes
" Dont Use 'hottie' for a guy unfront of me "
Rory and Lena start giggling
" Mom your boyfriend seems a little uptight " rory was joking about the boyfriend thing
" he is not my boyfriend. he is a boy who is my friend " Lorelai defends herself
" exactly your boyfriend "
" She probably thinks he is a hottie. woops im not allowed to use that word " rory and lena giggle again
" Girls stop harrasing Lorelai...Just cause she finds me as a hottie doesn't mean you can make fun of her " He says kidding around
the girls giggled some more and luke smiled
" I dont think your a hottie...i mean your not bad to look at...i mean...GAH!! Stop...we have to go. " redness going to her cheeks...Hoping Luke doesn't notice.
" Yea come on dad lets go" she grabed her dads hand and pulled him toward the door..rory did the same To Lorelai
" Ceasar be back later " he yelled from the door
" Dad can i go over to Rory's after school? " Lena asks on the way to school.
" you'll have to ask Lorelai, but i dont care "
" I don't care. You guys will have to hang at the inn until i go home. " She states.
" It's fine " Lena says.
" thanks mom " Rory looks at Lorelai.
they get to their class....
" Hey there's dean " She says pointing out a little boy walking around the class
" Yea " they smile with their eyes on him.
" Okay well i will see you later on then " Luke says and bend down to hug his daughter
" Bye dad "
" See you guys later " Lorelai bends down to hug both girls.
" Bye." they both say.
They walk inside the class.
" Hey Dean " Rory says waving.
" Hey Rory "
" hi " Lena says shyly
" Hi Lena "
" How was your summer? " Rory asks
" Good "
" thats cool..." she smiles at dean and he smiles back " Me and lena hung out all summer."
" thats cool. "
Mrs. Greenwood calls all the kids to sit at a desk.
Lena and rory sit at a table and dean joins them there is one more seat...A little asian girl sits there.
" Hi i am lena, and thats rory and dean " she says pointing to them
" Hi i am lane. "
" Are you new? I didn't see you here last year " Rory asks
" I did we just never talked to her " Lena says
" Oh sorry about that " Rory says to lane
" Its okay really "
" If you want Lena and i are going to my moms work after school you can come with us "
" Yea that sounds good..i have to ask my mom she is real strict. Are you Parents strict? "
" no...not at all " she looked at lena
" well my dad is Luke..and well he can be grumpy but he is nice to me " she smiles
" Thats cool. " Lane says
" My parents are okay. " Deans says
" okay. i can't wait now " Lane says getting excited
" Lena your dad is nice to my mom. Sometimes too nice." They giggle and Lane looks at them not knowing what they are talking about
" You ever think they would date?" Rory asks
" that be so cool. Then they could get married and we would be related " Lena says
" Lena we would be sisters "
" What are you guys talkig about? " Lane asks confused
" Miss Danes,Miss Gilmore and Miss Kim is there a topic you would like to share with the class? " the didnt notice the teacher had started and keptt talking
" We will fill you in after school" she whispered to Lane.
Rory looked to the teacher and answered her. " No ma'am go ahead." It was the first day of school and they were already in trouble hopefully she didnt call her mom or lena's dad
Later that Day Rory, Lena and Lane walked out of the Class they walked over to lorelai who was waiting for them outside the school...
" mom can lane come to the Inn also? "
" Uh sure...( to lane) where is your mom so we can ask her if she wouldn't mind."
"She is over there" pointing to a lady who is staring down Lorelai
" Okay...Come one girls lets go ask her " the girls follow Lorelai
Lorelai walks up to Mrs.Kim
" Hello i am Lorelai Gilmore I am rory's mother "
Mrs.Kim looks at her "yes "
" It seems Lane has made friends with Rory and She was wondering if she could well come over to play' "
" and how old are you? 16? "
" actually im 24 "
" not today. Lane has chores "
" but mama i did them yesterday "
" you have to clean " she says in a stern voice
" sorry guys " lane says turning around followin after mrs. Kim
" okay. Come on girls. I have some office work to
do. So you girls can come in there with me or stay in the lobby. "
" I love your office. we are so going in there "
" okay my office it is.. " Lorelai says
" okay ...it stunk lane couldn't come" Rory says to Lena
" I know her mom is uptight...just like your dad " The girl giggle
" Only worse " Lorelai says interupting in their conversation. Lena rolls her eyes
They reach the inn and run to the kitchen
" Hey Sookie do you have any sweet snacks? " Rory asks looking around the kitchen for some candy or desert of some sort.
" Yes try these " she hands them each a chocalte brownie drizzled with
white chocalte
Rory and Lena take one and take a bit out of them.
" MMmm They are great thanks sookie " Lena says half a mouth full of Brownie
" My mom told us to go to her office so see you later"
they walk out the kitchen as lorelai walks in
" You didn't fill them with sugar..Luke won't like that at all " Lorelai says
" its just like cookie lorelai thats all " Sookie says laughing
" just a cookie to you. If i take her home and she is bouncing off the walls her dad will have my neck " Lena walks in for another brownie
" its okay. I'll blame on me. " Lena says
" Thanks sweetie, but im the adult so i'll get the blame "
" Okay well if you insist" she shrugs and follows rory out the door
Sookie shakes her head and laughs
" that girl...crazy "
" Yea..so want somthing to eat? "
" nah i am not hungry....but i need coffee "
" I just made some " pointing to the coffee pot
" thanks. now i have to go and work "
" with lena and rory? "
": yea they are pretty quite. they help when i need it "
" yea they are good kids "
" Yea they are great kids...okay i better get to work"
Lorelai walks out the kitchen and into her office where Rory and lena are talking about luke and lorelai....When Lorelai walks in they quikly become quiet
" Whats going on? "
" N-nothing " Lena smiles
"uh-huh okay well i have to work so...if your up to somthing go be up to somthing in the lobby "
" okay come on lena lets go annoy michele "
Lorelai grabs her daughhter and hugs her
" I am so proud " they laugh
they go into the lobby and talk to michel
" hey michel "
" what do you want "
" just came to talk whats wrong with talking"
" because like your mom you dont know how to stop talking "
" okay then i will talk to you " Lena says smiling
" Dont you dare...your just as bad as they are....You are like lorelai too...."
" well thats not a bad thing"
" Yes it is...get out of my face"
Rory looked at Lena And rolled her eyes
Rory said to Lena "Come on lets go bug my mom"
"Yeah,she dont get irritated as easily"
they walk back into Lorelai's office
"So Lorelai watch you doing?"
"Busy work sweetie"
"Can i help? Can i? Can i?"
"no" She stated
"Please" lean put on the pout face
" Com'n guys....If you want to get home...i have to get all my work done, Plus i am not your dad, and i dont fall for the pouty face. I taught it to you both. " She says going striaght her work
" Mom, Please we can help you go quiker " Rory says
Lorelai ignores them
" so...Lorelai...How do you rate my dad on a scale of 1 to 10? " Lena says smiling giving a big grin at Rory...Who starts Giggling
Lorelai puts down the pincil she was using and looks at the two. " Guys! How many times do i have to tell you..Your father and I are just friends....JUST FRIENDS." She smiles and goes back to work..but then drops her pencil again " 9....and a half " She sais smiling
Lena and Rory starting laughing
"What is so funny?" She looks at the girls
"Should we tell her?" Lena asks Rory
"mm yeah"
"Last night when Rory was at my house. We asked my dad the same question and after he got annoyed he rated you a very perfectly 10"
"For and 8 year old you talk older than you age"
"It's my dad. what can i say"
Lorelai then realized what the girls has said and looked at them "A ten huh?"
" yea..I think he has a crush on you mom " rory said laughing
Lorelai finally gives up " okay lets go home...I wont get any work here anyways. I can do it in the morning. "
The Girls walk out of the Inn and back to Lorelai's house..
The girls sit down and watch T.V
" dont You have homework or somthing? " Lorelai asks
with out taking her eyes off the T.v Says " No, it was our first day we never get Home work :
Lorelai looks at Rory "well i know i have papers to sign. Can i have them?"
"In my book bag. Get them out"
"Rory?" lorelai was still looking at her
"Right.sorry. I'll get them"
"Thats better"
"Lena did your dad give you a time to be home?" Lena just shakes her head
.After about an Hour The girls were crashed on the couch
Luke comes and knocks on the door
Lorelai goes to the Door " hey, Come on in. They fell asleep " She said smiling leading him over to the couch.
" yea i can see that " he says laughing
" So.." She looks around the room ..there was an awkward silence " So yesturday When rory and Lena where at the apartment...Did they ask you anything about me? " She says smiling
"Like what?"
"well here is a hint. the asked me how i would rate you."
he laughs "Oh that.Yeah they asked me what i would rate you "
"What did you say?"
he smiles" If you say first i'll tell you"
"fine i said 9.....and a half"
his mouth dropped "well."
"Okay what about me?"
"I'll be honest i gave you a 1." Lorelai looked at him "Plus a zero which makes it 10"
" Yeah actually i knew.." He looked at her confused.
" They told me " She says
" oh i see " he says laughing rubbing the back of his head
" So..." She says smiling
" so...i better..you know" Pointing to Lena.
" right yea..school in the morning..You knnow if you ever have early deliverys...and you need her to stay a night. She can stay"
" yea...I know. You've told me a million times. I don't have early deliveries tomorow" He picks Lena up " well I better go " He smiles at her
" yea..bye.." She smiles
" See you in the morning " Luke says walking out the front door. Lorelai stands there smiling
" Yea" She says.
TBC......
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