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[dalostlorelai]

Chapter 1 love ya kid!

“Done!” exclaimed 16 year old Lorelai Gilmore, holding up the tiny jumper she mad from her Bananarama t-shirt.<[ the one she showed Sookie on the show] She walked over to her 8 month old daughter Rory. She looked down at her little angel. Lorelai loved her little girl with all her heart. Even though Rory’s dad Chris didn’t want to be a father to her. Rory stirred and looked up into her mothers shocking blue eyes. “sorry I woke you babe” whispered Lorelai, picking Rory up after she let out a little cry. Their eyes were the same rare blue. Lorelai put Rory on her bed and held up the jumper with a beaming smile “Rory look what your awesome mommy made you!” Rory just gave her a confused look on account of she was only 8 months old. “saving you enthusiasm for later, gotcha. Said Lorelai sarcastically. Picking up her daughter Lorelai put Rory in her crib and kissed her on the forehead and whispered “love ya kid” all Rory did was giggle at the feeling of her mom kissing her. Lorelai decided to take a shower then just go to bed. She stepped out of the shower 20 minuets and changed into a t-shirt and some pajama pants. Before turning off the light she checked on Rory one more time who was sound asleep. ‘she is one quiet kid.’ thought Lorelai “how is she related to me?” she giggled saying to herself. She looked at the clock and it said 8:15. “wow I can’t go to sleep yet. I’m 16 the only people who go to sleep now are old people. But I’m so tired! Taking care of a baby all day is hard work.” mumbled Lorelai closing her eyes. Just as she was dozing off the voice of the devil herself rung out causing her to sit right up. “Lorelai Gilmore get down here and take Rory’s stroller out of the hall! Honestly Lorelai it won’t bring its self up there now will it?” screamed Emily Gilmore “damn! I can’t get a second of sleep with that darling Emmy down there!” growled Lorelai rolling out of bed. The pitch and volume of Emily’s voice startled Rory made her wake up and cry. “shh. Its ok sweetie I’m here.” hushed Lorelai rocking the infant in her arms. Rory grabbed Lorelai’s finger and smiled through her tears. Lorelai remembered the first time Rory grabbed her finger like that. She was only 3 hours old. She walked down the stairs to hear her mother rambling on and on about falling and breaking her leg and then having to stay in a filthy hospital and eat that horrid food like pudding. “ugh, I wish” said Lorelai under her breath… Finally getting Rory to sleep she hushed Emily and pointed to Rory who had her face buried into Lorelai’s neck. Emily just looked at her granddaughter and said to her husband quietly “Richard we have to go. We must be at the fundraiser by 8:45” “ok Emily” said Richard tying his bow tie for the fifth time. “have fun” whispered Lorelai to her mother. “you too daddy” kissing her father on the cheek. Her parents left and Lorelai picked up the stroller and slowly walked up the stairs trying not to wake up her daughter. She folded the stroller up and put it behind her door. She then put Rory down in her crib and put a little blanket over her. She laughed at herself thinking hoe Rory still smelled pink. “love ya kid” she said and kissed her forehead. As she lay in her bed she thought to her self I love that little girl. She drifted off to sleep and dreamed about the day she and Rory were going to strike out on their own and move out of her parent’s house.


A.N
soo how did you like it. Should I continue it?
I tried to capture the whole Lorelai image but cut 16 or so years off of her

[dalostlorelai]

chapter 2 the letter

Disclaimer: as much as I wish I did I don’t own Gilmore girls. But 1 day……
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Lorelai woke up at 5:30 to feed a crying Rory. “Shh, shh, shh don’t cry Rory” said Lorelai and with that her daughters killer blues looked right at her and she laughed at the face her mother was making.

Just as Rory was drifting back to sleep Lorelai looked at the clock it was 6am. Richard walked into Lorelai’s room and saw his little girl tending to her own little girl. “Is every thing ok with you two?” Richard asked in his low soothing voice that made him Rory favorite person aside from her mother. “Yea just” Lorelai yawned “Rory was hungry so she woke up. She got a set of lung this one. I’m so proud.” that last bit was dripping with sarcasm.

With that she put her down and went downstairs with her dad who already had coffee ready. “Bless you” Lorelai said laughing sleepily. She poured her self a cup and put a little bit of sugar in it. It was so hard to believe that she gave up coffee for 6 months when she was pregnant with Rory.

“So what is on your agenda today Lorelai?” Richard asked sipping his coffee. “Well I might go to the mall or take a walk. Mostly I’m gonna hang with Rory. Get a little mommy baby bonding going.”

Little did Richard know this was the last time he would see his daughter in his house for a long time. As Richard was walking out Lorelai grabbed her suitcase. She packed her clothes then threw Rory’s few things in her diaper bag. She put every thing in Rory’s stroller. Then she took out a piece of paper and wrote:

Dear Emily & Richard,
when you read this I will be gone. I did not want my daughter to have a life like mine. I’m not sure where I’ll end up but I’ll call you when I get there.

Love Lorelai
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she held on to the note all day until around 5pm. She fed Rory and gave her a bath. She took a shower herself. She got dressed and finished packing. She put Rory in her stroller and said good-bye to the place she grew up. At around 6pm she put the note sown on the table and walked to the bus stop. She thought of how her parents would react to the note.

Sitting on the bus she passed her home, her school and even saw Rory’s dad Chris wondering around his house. She laughed at him. Rory woke up when they hit a bump. She let out a little whine which made Lorelai snap out of la-la land. She looked down and giggled just like Rory did when she made a funny face.

The bus ride went on for about 20 minuets. She got off the bus at the very end of Hartford to grab some food. Lorelai was dying for coffee. She was feeding Rory when a police officer came in. she held up a picture of Lorelai and Rory and asked of the waitress had seen them. By the time she pointed to the booth they were sitting they had left.

“My parents sent out a search party and they call me crazy” said Lorelai. Rory had been napping, so Lorelai decided to also. 10 minuets later the bus stopped which made Lorelai wake up.

She stepped off the bus and into Stars Hollow a perfect looking story book town with the population of 9,971. “Wow this place feels special.” said Lorelai as Rory was waking up rubbing her head on Lorelai’s chest. When she looked up she smiled and said “mommy” very weakly. Lorelai felt tears running down her face. “Hey babe” she said.

“This place is magical” thought Lorelai walking through this wonderful down. She walked into a little bakery where a little old woman walked up to her.

“Welcome to Weston’s young lady. I’m Fran Weston owner of this bakery. Are you new in town?” “Yea” replied Lorelai. “I’m Lorelai Gilmore and this is my daughter Rory.” “Daughter? How old are you?” “I’m 17 mam” “well I’ll be she is so precious” giggled Fran tickling Rory under her chin. Rory was giggling uncontrollably. “Where are my manners? Would you like some coffee Lorelai?” “I would love some Ms. Weston”. Fran gave Lorelai a cup of coffee and sat with her feeding Rory cookies. Lorelai like this woman. She was much nicer than her grandmother Lorelai Gilmore the first . “is there anywhere I could stay a hotel maybe?” asked Lorelai.

“well there is and inn just a few minuets from here. The independence inn. A very nice woman named Mia runs it. Here ill give you directions” said Fran writing on a napkin. “ok well we gotta get going. Thank you Ms. Weston” “call me Fran”. “ok Fran” said Lorelai.

“mommy!” said Rory when they were walking out of the bakery. “what is it honey? O I know, you didn’t want to leave the cookies. well don’t worry ya still got me!” Rory looked disappointed “ thanks for the love” said Lorelai hugging Rory and kissing her all over her face. “Rory just giggled and between breaths repeated “mommy!”. “aww I love you Rory.” giggles Lorelai. “wuv oh mommy” now Lorelai was crying tears of joy. 10 minuets later they were in front of the independence inn. “well here goes nothing” said Lorelai turning the knob to her future.

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so how’d you like it? Was is good was it bad should I cry? Reviews are more then welcome to come over.

[dalostlorelai]

chapter 3: sister, No daughter


Lorelai walked into the lobby and was greeted by a silver haired woman wearing a blue vintage coat which she thought was really pretty. I gotta have that jacket thought Lorelai. “hello welcome to the independence inn. I’m Mia how can I help you?”

“hi Mia my name is Lorelai Gilmore, Fran Weston told me that I would be able to stay here.” “ahh yes hello Lorelai. Fran just called and told me of your situation. Are your parents here?” “nope. its just me and Rory.” said Lorelai proudly looking at a sleeping Rory. “I’m guessing this is rory.” said mia looking at rory with caring eyes.
“yup that’s her in all her glory” laughed Lorelai.

“well young lady, I understand you need a place to stay correct?” said mia a little more serious. “yes and a job any job” said Lorelai standing up straight.

“well then you came to the right place.” said mia “I can give you a job as a maid and if you would like I can take care of Rory while you work. As for a place to stay I can let you two stay in the old potting shed. Its not very big but its better than nothing. It is in shambles right now so you can stay in a room for now. I will have the shed looking better in a matter of days.” Lorelai was so happy that she hugged mia. “let me guess your happy aren’t you?” “ oh mia you have no idea!” said Lorelai on the verge of tears.

At time Rory was waking up “ hey sweets meet mia. Mia this is my daughter Rory.”
“hello rory” said mia looking down at the well rested little girl. “mommy!” Rory said looking up at Lorelai who was waving her hand. Rory repeated the motion that Lorelai was doing which was waving at mia. “that is so sweet she looks just like you.” said mia “well who could blame her?” laughed Lorelai flattering her self.

“let me show you to where you are staying” said mia leading the Gilmore girls to room 12.

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after rory had a nap Lorelai walked around the town for a little while. A large woman stopped her “hello my name is Patricia Lacasta but you can call me miss patty. Who is this little angel?” “this is my daughter rory.” said Lorelai. “well she is precious! Are you new in town?” “yes I just moved here I’m working at the independence inn.” “well ill let you go” said ms. patty and made a very dramatic exit.

Lorelai walked a little bit more when she ran into a tall man with sunglasses on hand in hand with a short pudgy woman. “Hey suga I’m babette dell and this is my husband morey” she pointed at the tall man “heyy” he said cooley. “hi morey, babette. I’m Lorelai and this is Lorelai jr. or rory for short.” looking at rory who clapped when she saw the kitten that Babette was holding. “sister?” asked babette “no daughter” said Lorelai proudly. So many people guessed sister since she was so young. “o ok that’s sweet. She looks just like you.” said babette showing rory the kitten. “her names cinnamon rory” said babette. “shimomonom? Mommy?” said rory looking very confused. “it’s ok sweetie you’ll figure it out one of these days.” said Lorelai not being able to control her laughter. “ well we have to be going” said morey “ see ya around” and with that they left.

The Gilmore girls continued to walk until they were stopped at the grocery store by a fat man in a cardigan. “ hello there I’m Taylor Doose town selectman. I don’t believe we have met.” “I’m Lorelai Gilmore and this is rory” “is rory your sister?” “no she is my daughter” second person in 20 minuets “ah I see.” said Taylor with a disapproving tone in his voice. “ ok well we have to be going. I’ll see ya around Taylor” “yes you will” then they went their separate ways. this town is weird thank god. thought Lorelai.

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While she walked around she saw a silver jaguar fly around the corner with a man and woman in the front. “no! damn! How did they find me?” with that Lorelai ran into the closest place. A hardware store.

She closed the door behind her which caused the bells on the top to jingle. “Luke will you help the costumer im a little busy” “no problem dad” Lorelai stood there looking at a wallpaper kit. “I like this how about you rory ya like it?” she said holding up box with rose bud wallpaper. Rory just clapped. In her language that meant yes. “$7.50 not too bad I can swing that.” just as she was walking up to the counter a young man 18 the oldest walked out in a flannel shirt and a backwards baseball hat. holy crap he’s hot! thought Lorelai. she’s beautiful! thought Luke is that a baby? She’s way too young to have a kid. Maybe its her sister. “hi there I’m Lorelai and this is my daughter rory we’re new in town. I came in here because I ran away from my house with rory and I just saw my parents drive by. I didn’t want them to see me so I ducked out in here. Then I saw this wallpaper so I said ‘hey let me buy something from the store that provided me shelter’ .” she chuckled nervously . When Lorelai was nervous she would ramble. nice job Gilmore you just made a complete idiot of yourself in front of a hot guy. “ um.. H.. hi.. Luke. Um .. I’m Luke” Luke would stutter when he was nervous . nice job Danes you just made a complete idiot of yourself in front of a beautiful girl. “ok well I better go here is $7.50 for the wallpaper thank you . Um see ya Luke.” then she walked out before her face turned red. Luke stood there marveled by her beautiful face. Finally he said “ um bye Lorelai” but it was too late. She was out the door.

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Lorelai and rory arrived back at the inn right after that. They were greeted again by mia. “good news Lorelai. A nice boy around your age will be coming by at noon tomorrow to fix up the shed. His name is Lucas Danes and his father runs a hardware store in town.” Luke is short for Lucas. O great! “that’s awesome mia! If you would excuse me I’m going to put rory to bed then I’m going to sleep my self. What time do you want me to start tomorrow ?” “o no dear you start on Monday. Tomorrow I want you to get the lay of the land then just hangout.” “ok mia good night. Say good night rory “goop ight” said rory yawning. “close enough sweets close enough.” with that the two young Gilmore girls went upstairs and went to sleep.

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that was the longest chapter yet! How’d ya all like this one? I had fun writing it for you. don’t worry more to come.
Please review. If you don’t then ill get sad and go to my room and cry. But them Gilmore girls will come on and ill be happy again but then ill think of how there are no reviews then ill cry again. We see how the vicious circle can go on and on and on an don and. Well you get the point. SEE YA!

[dalostlorelai]

chapter 4: one in a million


Disclaimer: sadly I don’t own Gilmore girls but I will trust me I will.. kidding…
maybe..

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the alarm went off at 7:30. “I hate mornings!” exclaimed Lorelai getting out of bed to see rory already up and playing with the teddy bear Lorelai got her when they moved to stars hollow.

“how in the world are you up. I mean you mustn’t be my daughter if you get up with out a hassle.” said Lorelai. Rory just looked at her and said “ mommy, up.”
“if you weren’t so cute I’d be mad.” giggled Lorelai “ready to hang with mommy?” rory nodded.

Lorelai took a quick shower and gave rory a bath. She put on the outfit she planned to wear on account of they were fixing the shed and dressed rory in a cute little t-shirt pair of cords that were way to big for her. As she was walking down the stairs giggling as rory played with her ponytail Lorelai heard an all to familiar voice.

“can you tell me where Lorelai Gilmore is?” asked a scrawny young man.
“I’m sorry who are you?” asked mia seeing Lorelai on the steps mortified.
“Christopher” whispered Lorelai “I’m Christopher Hayden mam. I’m her baby’s father.” “you mean Rory’s father?” said Mia sounding a little harsh “ Lorelai is busy right now. How did you know that she was here?”

Lorelai was about to turn around and go back upstairs when Chris saw her “lore!” “damn! He saw me. What do I do? what do I do? What do I do?” Lorelai said to herself. “hello Christopher” she said cooley. “this must be rory! Come her kiddo and say hi to your dad!” said Chris holding his arms out to rory who screamed “mommy!” and buried her face into Lorelai neck.

“what the hell was that all about?” asked Chris getting angry.
“ that Christopher is your daughter meeting you for the first time. Rory is a little shy you have to ease into a relationship with her carefully.”

“like hell I do! Damn lore she my daughter!” said Chris raising his voice.
“ don’t you dare yell at me Christopher! I never did anything wrong to you! You have no right to come here and yell at me. Wait how’d you know I was here?”
“your mother saw you come here when she was here looking for you. She told me to come get you.” “like I would go anywhere with you.” “oh your going” he said grabbing her by the wrist causing her to wince. “let go of me you jerk!” she yelled which caused rory to get very startled.



Just as Luke walked into the inn ready to work he saw Chris slap Lorelai then see rory cry and see Chris slap her too.
“oh hell no” said Luke quietly . he dropped the bag he was holding and ran Christopher down.

He tackled him and punched him so hard in the face he made one of his teeth chip. As he dragged Chris outside to kick his ass Mia went over to Lorelai who was holding her face and trying to calm rory down. “aww baby its ok mommy fine” Lorelai said trying not to cry “ mommy huwt. Me huwt” Rory said rubbing both her face and her moms face. She was beginning to speak in sentences.
Mia ran over and hugged both of them as tight as she could. “its ok girls Lucas will take care of him” o my god. How could a man be that mean to his a beautiful woman and an infant?

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outside

“who the hell are you?” Chris asked Luke

“ I’m Luke who the hell are you?” asked Luke grabbing Chris by the collar.

“I’m Rory’s father and I’m taking her and Lorelai with me back to Hartford.” Chris said swinging at Luke.

“like hell you are. After you treat them like that.” he gave Chris a punch in the stomach.” hitting a beautiful woman.” he hit Chris again.” then you hit a little child as precious as rory? How dare you” Luke was screaming in his ear and kicking him.

“ you want the tramp that much take her. I don’t want her.”

“don’t you DARE call Lorelai a tramp.” growled Luke. “ she’s one in a million! You should kiss the ground she walks on!”

“I’m done! I give up. I hope you two are happy together. I never really wanted her. She was just my arm candy. When she got pregnant I was PISSED! You think I wanted to take care of a kid?” screamed Chris having a fit like a 2 year old would.

“do you think she wants to take care of a kid? NO but she took her responsibility for her actions. Have you ever seen those two together laughing? No you couldn’t have cause you’re a deadbeat! that’s all you will ever be! So just get the hell out of here!” yelled Luke throwing Chris into the door of his car.

Chris fiddled with his keys and drove away.

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after getting rory to calm down Lorelai went outside and saw Chris speeding away.

“thank you Luke” she said falling into his arms holding Rory.

“anytime Lorelai really.” Luke said stroking her hair.

“uuke!” rory said gripping his shirt.

“hey rory! Are you ok?” she nodded yes.

Lorelai was so shook up that she decided that they would fix up the shed the next day. Just before walking up stairs she ran to Luke who was walking over to his truck. “ Luke wait!”

whets up Lorelai?” with that she pulled him to her and kissed on the lips with so much passion. She pulled away leaving him stunned and walked away giggling. He jus smiles and walked away.
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A/N how’d you like that. O just to let you know this will be a java junkies dream. L&L all the way! O and Chris will be showing up again but he will get a real beating. Soon Lorelai’s parents will come but not yet. Not yet. REVIEW and ill love you forever!

[dalostlorelai]

this chapter I just started so help me out
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chapter 5: (no real name but help me with the name and ill thank you! the new couple?


Disclaimer: I don’t own Gilmore girls. I wish I did. But I don’t. one day you wait you’ll see ! Im just joking… maybe
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“hey sweets wanna go get some breakfast?” Lorelai asked her 9 month old daughter.

“uukes mommy?” asked rory.

“yea babe lukes” said Lorelai.

The two girls got dressed and walked out of the inn. It was around 11 am. This was the time Lorelai usually got up.

Her face hurt a little bit and their was a small bruise but nothing really big. Rory on the other hand had a bruise from her eye to her little chin. All night she was holding her face and crying. Lorelai did pretty much the same thing.

They both cried themselves to sleep. Instead of rory sleeping in her bassinet Lorelai had her cuddled up next to her on the bed. In the morning they watched some cartoons to calm down an relax. Both were getting hungry so they ventured out to lukes.

[gilmoregirlsrulez]

tats rly good plz cont. i luv tat ur keepin th L&L relationship alive ive always hated Chris plz cont

[dalostlorelai]

i have major writers block thats the porblem

[Lorelai Gilmore]

I like it, but the parts with Rory are really unrealistic....A 9 month old can't talk like that...I have a 10 month old cousin who is just started in for little words like "Up" and "Mama"...It's kind of unrealistic...But I love the story! Continue!

[dalostlorelai]

well some 9 month olds can say certian words.
note ignore chapter 5 this is what it reall yis

Disclaimer: I don’t own Gilmore girls. I wish I did. But I don’t. one day you wait you’ll see ! Im just joking… maybe
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“hey sweets wanna go get some breakfast?” Lorelai asked her 9 month old daughter.

“yea yea” asked rory.

“yea babe lukes” said Lorelai.

The two girls got dressed and walked out of the inn. It was around 11 am. This was the time Lorelai usually got up.

Her face hurt a little bit and their was a small bruise but nothing really big. Rory on the other hand had a bruise from her eye to her little chin. All night she was holding her face and crying. Lorelai did pretty much the same thing.

They both cried themselves to sleep. Instead of rory sleeping in her bassinet Lorelai had her cuddled up next to her on the bed. In the morning they watched some cartoons to calm down and relax. Both were getting hungry so they ventured out to Weston’s.
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on their way Lorelai decided to see if Luke wanted to join them. The bell on the door rang and William Danes looked up from his orders. “ hello miss what do ya need?” he asked Lorelai. “ I’m looking for Luke sir.” “o ok hold on a second. Luke get out here there’s a young woman looking for you.” “I’m coming pop” Lorelai heard Luke call from be hind a curtain.

When she heard his voice she smiled. “uuke!!” rory called seeing Luke. He came from upstairs wearing a star trek t-shirt. “hey Lorelai. Hey rory!” “o my god! Luke Danes you’re a trekkie?” “ huh? What? O the shirt. My aunt bought it for me. I don’t really like the show I just want to make her happy.” “well I never wanted to make any aunt of mine that happy. Hmm my day wasn’t that good until now!” “ you came here to mock me?” asked Luke in a low growl.

“no actually we we’re wondering if you would like to come to breakfast with us. So what do ya say or is that in violation of the prime directive. You have to beamed up by Scotty?”
Lorelai was now having a laughing fit which caused rory to laugh and when William walked in he started laughing. “ okay you had your laugh now how about we get that breakfast?” asked Luke pretty much turning red putting on his flannel shirt over the star trek one. “Alright lets go.” Lorelai and Luke walked out hand in hand.
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“ o my god! Patty guess what I just saw? Luke and that new girl Lorelai were walking out of the hardware store holding hands! Ya think there together?” yelled babette running into the dance studio. “are you kidding. Yesterday mrs.casinni was on a walk by the in and saw them locking lips! We gotta talk to Will about this!” “ok lets go” with that the stars hollow gossip queens left for the hardware store.
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The trio arrived in Weston’s and took a set by the window.

[gilmoregirlsrulez]

this is great so far! and thnk bout it we r talkin bout rory im sure she could say a lot of words anyway plz cont.!

[ilvgilmoregirls]

I really like it, i like the way you wrote it...I usually dont lk the whole 'beggining' eppys like when Rory is a baby. but yours is good. Oh and Babys who are 9 months can talk like that, cause my cousin is like 10 and he can say alot...it is different for some, cause another cousin is 2 and can barley undestand him. It depends, but Rory is smart, so she probably should know how to talk..a lil....I really like it!